Re: Desperate Season by Sisterwolf	Stephen Robins 84.13.39.68	10-Jan-06/9:10 AM
Like swallowing a gigantic glass of swamped bed linen.
Re: light [edited] by lmp	<~> 167.206.181.179	10-Jan-06/9:04 AM
still, it's not a complete image, even if it is a lovely one. the hard-ass in me wants a complete image from my haiku.
Re: After the Storm by somemorepoetry	<~> 167.206.181.179	10-Jan-06/8:58 AM
"And shoved in to rest in the silt from the north Fields grown tired with potatoes." really nice work, here.
Re: Sleep It All Away by somemorepoetry	<~> 167.206.181.179	10-Jan-06/8:55 AM
you say you just need a friend. man, that's the worst place to be, ever. wrap her up in that blanket, why don't you.
Re: Mittens by somemorepoetry	<~> 167.206.181.179	10-Jan-06/8:53 AM
when mittens turn, they fall? the title into the first line misleads me. i know what you are talking about, i just don't like the stretch.
Re: Oh Verrazano by Joe-joe	<~> 167.206.181.179	10-Jan-06/8:35 AM
there are some nice moments here. i especially enjy\oy the metaphor of the steel and iron as her dress. i think that the rhyme you use distractst he reader. since it came first, i looked for the whole thing to have rhythm and rhyme, and was a little disappointed when it didn't hold throughout.
Re: I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy	zodiac 209.193.18.119	10-Jan-06/8:28 AM
Anne Boleyn is the easiest historical figure.
Re: The chestnut by richa	zodiac 209.193.18.119	10-Jan-06/8:27 AM
I liked the original better.
Re: Tulip by richa	zodiac 209.193.18.119	10-Jan-06/8:26 AM
The poor tulip boy has poor taste that he loves his patch and his trowel and spade and his landlord, the dame that he sells to in the market his red and yellow flames. I am a poor tulip boy with not a purse nor a name, made to grow tulips in clay and sleep in my shoes on a poor tulip boy wage, happy to sell none today. You're welcome. Nice.
Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.198	10-Jan-06/8:07 AM
Wierdsconsin. Kenosha to be spec. I used to do a great deal of east coast work but they've beefed up the force so I run the midwest area now. Less stress as a driver but the eastern seaboard is a poetry mecca.
Re: I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.69	10-Jan-06/8:02 AM
Poems like this make me so proud to be male. not
Re: a comment on Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones	zodiac 209.193.18.119	10-Jan-06/7:59 AM
Welcome back. What have you been doing?
Re: Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones	zodiac 209.193.18.119	10-Jan-06/7:57 AM
The best part is how you misspelled "letch" in the title.
Re: a comment on floss every day by digipoet	zodiac 209.193.18.119	10-Jan-06/7:54 AM
Yes, but it's researching things.
Re: Reckoning by <~>	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.69	10-Jan-06/7:52 AM
'Mornin. be over in a minute and I'm bringing something for one of the short story forums.
Re: Reckoning by <~>	lmp 141.154.134.3	10-Jan-06/7:47 AM
could it be a crush? more likely a power struggle... dont have much time now, but will think on it. i can feel the frustration and anger, yet those emotions are delivered with the delicateness of one who is as you have written in the last verse. nicely done.
Re: a comment on It's Time by PoeticXTC	Stephen Robins 84.13.140.120	10-Jan-06/7:10 AM
That last comment is a complete lie. South Africa is run by Aids, for Aids. Don't believe M'beki; its infected him and made him its ally in its quest for world domination. it is real and it is powerful, if we are not careful it could spread outside of the blacks and gorillas who mate with each other and consume the whole world in some kind of pandemic
Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy	amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.37	10-Jan-06/6:27 AM
Oh! You didn't like my poem? Which one?
Re: Tulip by richa	cyan9 217.40.63.105	10-Jan-06/5:36 AM
What on earth is this???
Re: Flicking by INTRANSIT	richa 81.178.226.106	10-Jan-06/4:03 AM
Third stanza would replace 'all the while keeping my eyes fixed' with 'my eyes fixed'. Might shift up and roll on a bit. Otherwise you have 4 words to 4 lines.