| Re: You're passionate by EAger to Offend |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
14-Feb-09/5:47 PM |
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Sounds like someone I know.
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| Re: To Michelle by ALChemy |
sliver 209.248.123.229 |
4-Feb-09/11:11 PM |
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I am baffled yet again, that's why I saved this to my fav's. Stupendous, genious, a piece of art.
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| Re: Gladly For Love by sliver |
sliver 209.248.123.229 |
4-Feb-09/10:50 PM |
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I know it's cheesy, but what's so wrong with that verse in particular?
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| Re: a comment on Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer |
some deleted user 64.183.31.242 |
28-Jan-09/1:58 PM |
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You subnormal miscreant, why don't you check your emails once in a while?
I'm may be up that way soon. I should want to meet.
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| Re: The PROJECT by Sigh'ense... |
Dovina 75.82.253.189 |
21-Jan-09/3:59 PM |
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Down where I don't live, but can feel it, nicely done
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| Re: The flute sound makes me blue by Prince of Void |
Dovina 75.82.253.189 |
21-Jan-09/3:57 PM |
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blue somber flute, bright bird-like flute. I like baroque flute best. breathy and down - flute. nice
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| Re: If I Had by forsaken |
Sigh'ense... 69.225.133.126 |
17-Jan-09/9:25 PM |
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| Re: Ever With Me by forsaken |
Sigh'ense... 69.225.133.126 |
17-Jan-09/9:19 PM |
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| Re: Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar |
malpaso 70.233.167.164 |
16-Jan-09/5:20 PM |
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loved the part about the berkas and the puddles....enhances the whole theme of timelessness and that kind of subtle power
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
dclark 68.209.116.205 |
15-Jan-09/6:19 PM |
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it's just a voice people choose.
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
Stephen Robins 62.73.157.126 |
12-Jan-09/7:34 AM |
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I understand you. You suffered a great loss in your early life and have spent the rest of it trying to replace the loss with a gigantic prosthetic. Unfortunately whilst some may replace a broken penis with a snooker ball in a sock you have chosen a she-pee.
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| Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina |
Prince of Void 77.237.64.242 |
11-Jan-09/2:37 PM |
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it's not about your poem
it's about you though
oh love... you have no kind of flaw or fault
so then we begin to sing and make love
everything that s excellent
let our hearts just as pure and fair
may beat in as one heart
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| Re: a comment on the invisible beauty by Prince of Void |
Prince of Void 77.237.64.242 |
11-Jan-09/2:31 PM |
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Oh love.. you have no kind of flaw or fault
so then we begin to sing
everything that s excellent
let our hearts just as pure and fair
may beat in as one heart
Love Are you there ?
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| Re: a comment on poetry by nrevatehtni |
malpaso 70.233.150.10 |
10-Jan-09/8:52 AM |
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hey, how about a poem about bitching about another poem about how the muse struck while sitting one on the toilet (a plagiarized poem at that!) called 'what if you took a shit and the turd reversed itself in time and jumped back up your ass?'
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| Re: The Politics of Poetry.coms by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
malpaso 70.233.151.75 |
8-Jan-09/4:23 PM |
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at least you're not bitter!
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| Re: Gladly For Love by sliver |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:51 PM |
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I figured it a love letter to someone you know and was about to suggest handwriting and sending, until the last verse.
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| Re: Snorting the Cosmic Dust. by DreamerSupreme |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:27 PM |
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Like it even though it preaches like the preacher it condemns.
âJesus saw redemption . . . suicide or the cleansing of sinâ interesting line
âKeep thy eyes forwardâ Thatâs âthineâ but mixing vintage is a sin
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| Re: Back to reality by Prince of Void |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:17 PM |
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Swimming to the end of the ocean is a great way to go. Like riding a bicycle day after day until . . .
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| Re: the invisible beauty by Prince of Void |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:14 PM |
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Thank you, I take it personally behind my fake face, for there I am beautiful
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:07 PM |
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I write bad poetry and procrastinate my death. Yawn.
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