Re: Healing by hobojo	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:56 AM
meh
Re: Bacchus and the Ivy by <{Baba^Yaga}>	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:56 AM
"and why it might"? Has a good lyric sense to it, but it feels like too much nonsense, too. A touch of bob dylan, a touch of the beatles, and other things I recognize but can't name--but I think more it winds up just "touched". Then again, 6am, I might be reading too much or too little... In the end, I enjoyed it, and that's always a plus.
Re: no title by Dovina	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:54 AM
:heh: I had some trouble with the transition from 1 to 2; and 3 felt somewhat cheap.
Re: My love is drowning in PCP by T. Jonathron Remp	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:53 AM
I like "shine spasm". The rest doesn't work so much for me.
Re: panpragmalogoethospathos by malpaso	nentwined 75.83.196.201	27-Feb-09/5:52 AM
interesting. there's chunks and cake and nugget here. but kind of disheartening to pick them out of the puke. refine?
Re: a comment on brain cookies by nentwined	nentwined 75.83.196.201	26-Feb-09/9:56 PM
woot woot :D
Re: brain cookies by nentwined	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	26-Feb-09/9:43 PM
i lol'd
Re: The death of Carlos Huarrez by Caducus	malpaso 70.233.138.77	25-Feb-09/9:35 AM
Ah,First World meets Third World....by chance? Excellent work!!
Re: The Project by malpaso	malpaso 70.233.138.77	24-Feb-09/9:27 AM
'always'? you mean like everytime you read it? how sweet!!!!
Re: 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly	jessicazee 67.53.0.108	17-Feb-09/10:53 PM
awesome
Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	16-Feb-09/5:26 PM
Because this reminds me of the old days, ten!
Re: 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	16-Feb-09/5:12 PM
Is this the new Jenny Craig diet? I find black licorice mixes well with kisses. Nine for 9.
Re: The Project by malpaso	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	16-Feb-09/5:09 PM
I know a few prefab holes I'd like to stick my trunk into. they say it feels like warm jello pie... but like this poem it always leaves me feeling a bit empty, and wanting more. Here's an 7 for the intrigue.
Re: Echoes of Eichmann by Caducus	Bill Z Bub 192.139.153.30	15-Feb-09/2:16 PM
this one is difficult. I shall rate it with a randomly generated number.
Re: a comment on in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined	Dovina 66.245.196.6	15-Feb-09/11:40 AM
True, but iphone wont help, I think. It's still the best constructed poetry site on the internet
Re: To my Moneta by Bill Z Bub	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	15-Feb-09/10:59 AM
This is my St. Valentine's Day poem. Think Hallmark would buy it?
Re: a comment on in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined	nentwined 98.148.241.139	14-Feb-09/9:05 PM
It definitely goes in cycles. But this one's definitely more of a downer than previous ones. In the bus terminal of the future... poemranker is the writing on the wall. I'm thinking of making it iPhone-friendly. Any thoughts on how to get fresh blood? Just need people reading and commenting and voting... or more typically just commenting and voting ;)
Re: a comment on Gladly For Love by sliver	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	14-Feb-09/6:04 PM
I believe Dovina meant that the last stanza reveals that this poem is addressed to someone who you don't know. Thus she cannot suggest you write it down and mail it, since you have no one to mail it to.
Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	14-Feb-09/6:00 PM
This place is dead! Or perhaps hibernating?
Re: Pink BAlls by EAger to Offend	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	14-Feb-09/5:48 PM
I'd settle for two, but knight thee with a 10.