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panpragmalogoethospathos (Free verse) by malpaso
my wife quit her job so I work fulltime now in my world, if the dishesdone trashout financesfigured strategieslaidout then my shield againstheworld 'n' my fireweapon is complete, the only environment: Time. this is so emotional, a cake with chunks of anxiety and hope/ this is so logical because ifthisthenthat and moral beyondcomprehension for its honesty;practicalfor results=truth. &confusing.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8137
Posted: January 13, 2009 9:01 AM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2009 9:01 AM PST
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[5] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 27-Feb-09/5:52 AM | Reply
interesting. there's chunks and cake and nugget here. but kind of disheartening to pick them out of the puke. refine?
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