poemranker ::panpragmalogoethospathos by malpaso

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Free verse № 156468

panpragmalogoethospathos

Member since 2007 · Posted 13 Jan 2009 · 1 comment

my wife quit her job so I work fulltime now in my world, if the dishesdone trashout financesfigured strategieslaidout then my shield againstheworld 'n' my fireweapon is complete, the only environment: Time. this is so emotional, a cake with chunks of anxiety and hope/ this is so logical because ifthisthenthat and moral beyondcomprehension for its honesty;practicalfor results=truth. &confusing.

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[5] nentwined 27-Feb-09/5:52 AM Reply
interesting. there's chunks and cake and nugget here. but kind of disheartening to pick them out of the puke. refine?