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panpragmalogoethospathos (Free verse) by malpaso my wife quit her job so I work fulltime now
in my world, if the dishesdone trashout financesfigured
strategieslaidout then my shield againstheworld 'n' my
fireweapon is complete, the only environment: Time.
this is so emotional, a cake with chunks of anxiety and
hope/
this is so logical because ifthisthenthat and moral beyondcomprehension
for its honesty;practicalfor results=truth.
&confusing.
Up the ladder:
Wednesday, darling you complete me forever.
Down the ladder:
One More, Then We Go
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Posted: January 13, 2009 9:01 AM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2009 9:01 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 8138 Comments:
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nentwined @ 75.83.196.201
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27-Feb-09/5:52 AM
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interesting. there's chunks and cake and nugget here. but kind of disheartening to pick them out of the puke. refine?
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