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panpragmalogoethospathos (Free verse) by malpaso

my wife quit her job so I work fulltime now in my world, if the dishesdone trashout financesfigured strategieslaidout then my shield againstheworld 'n' my fireweapon is complete, the only environment: Time. this is so emotional, a cake with chunks of anxiety and hope/ this is so logical because ifthisthenthat and moral beyondcomprehension for its honesty;practicalfor results=truth. &confusing.

nentwined 27-Feb-09/5:52 AM
interesting. there's chunks and cake and nugget here. but kind of disheartening to pick them out of the puke. refine?




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