| Re: a comment on To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
Dovina 208.127.228.52 |
5-Jan-09/5:01 PM |
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| Re: a comment on To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
INTRANSIT 69.23.211.222 |
5-Jan-09/8:25 AM |
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To those that would teach poetry.
mofo
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| Re: a comment on To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.249 |
3-Jan-09/10:13 PM |
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Publishing online is a bitch and a half... one must be hidden amongst the mounds of crud. Every bastard with a keyboard feels his crud is gold.
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
Prince of Void 77.237.67.85 |
3-Jan-09/1:57 PM |
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to poets who has ignored the concept of beauty
is something we define and re-define
we just get things worse by ignoring the beauties that we are the fathers of ...
we're here in the same wasteland of poetry
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| Re: a comment on To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.249 |
3-Jan-09/11:43 AM |
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repost link mofo, you messed it up. Or mention title.
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| Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina |
Prince of Void 77.237.66.141 |
3-Jan-09/9:09 AM |
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The beauty of your poem is that it's beautifully simple and It's just great
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
INTRANSIT 69.23.211.222 |
2-Jan-09/7:33 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Always by hobojo |
DreamerSupreme 75.30.177.249 |
2-Jan-09/11:21 AM |
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Stop saying "I am a terrible writer.". You are good when you decide you're good-- confidence has many merits, and they are boundless. Doubtless you'll look back at the old pieces and shake your head in wonder as to how you conjured that shit up-- the weak points like bleeding bulletholes: Revise, twist, take risk, push your concepts as far as possible. Even failure is success when you take that and rewrite your blueprints having learned your particular strengths and weaknesses. You'll come to learn what works and what doesn't, it'll become instinctual. Pursue the thought that "I'm fuckin liquid fire flowing beneath the crust waiting to erupt." and write. Don't try, DO it, and do it relentlessly.
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| Re: a comment on 2012 - The Haiku Remix. by DreamerSupreme |
DreamerSupreme 75.30.177.249 |
2-Jan-09/5:53 AM |
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Holy shite, there be life here in the ghost-town known as rankerville!
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| Re: 2012 - The Haiku Remix. by DreamerSupreme |
INTRANSIT 69.23.211.222 |
28-Dec-08/4:48 PM |
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wouldn't have to wait if someone would just push the damn thing.
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| Re: Horus, Thy Eye. by SupremeDreamer |
INTRANSIT 69.23.211.222 |
28-Dec-08/4:47 PM |
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| Re: beauty by Adriaan |
Spirit52 86.138.133.59 |
20-Dec-08/1:46 PM |
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Vivid images here....excellent!
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| Re: a comment on Always by hobojo |
hobojo 24.143.147.163 |
19-Dec-08/2:14 PM |
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Your version is much better, yes. Changes the meaning a bit though. I know I am a terrible writer, but it is one of the many things I am trying to get better at. Thanks for taking the time to write your thoughts, I always enjoy reading your poems.
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| Re: a comment on Watching December's Wind by dclark |
dclark 68.19.115.15 |
19-Dec-08/1:32 AM |
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I usually insert paper and pens into my rectum.
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| Re: Poop! by dougsoderstrom |
OMOMOMOM 86.142.241.74 |
18-Dec-08/7:20 AM |
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| Re: The Toilet Paper Tumbles by PsydewaysTears |
OMOMOMOM 86.142.241.74 |
18-Dec-08/7:18 AM |
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| Re: The toilet by The Eskimo King |
OMOMOMOM 86.142.241.74 |
18-Dec-08/7:15 AM |
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| Re: Of Bobjims (An actual poem this time!?!) by Bobjim |
OMOMOMOM 86.142.241.74 |
18-Dec-08/7:12 AM |
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i liked it but i thought that bit just didnt fit in u should have just kept gay:(Well, actually paedophilic but it wouldn't sound right in this
poem, never mind, it's near enough.),but still good
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| Re: Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac |
Dovina 75.82.253.189 |
16-Dec-08/5:15 PM |
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| Re: a comment on About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote |
DreamerSupreme 75.18.164.147 |
15-Dec-08/7:45 AM |
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Your welcome. Take the anguish and conjure up the soul-- it is painful but, none-the-less, necessary.
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