This defines "fuck off, you're shit at poetry".

nice. :)

hey, "Daaaaaaark Aaaaaangel", you are such a complete idiot. I love the advice you gave MarkWells - you know, to actually read some poetry before writing some poetry. Well, this poem you've insulted is actually a quite famous poem by Neruda (although, I don't suppose you've ever heard of him). Anyhow, this was once a useful site, Kaolin, but not since it's been populated by people who get off on insulting decent work for kicks. Clearly, industrious people like you, dark angel, should get off your ass and do some work for a living. You must lead a very sad, lonely life. I bet your parents never loved you. Why don't you slit your wrists and get it over with. Your poems and comments are an obvious plea for help. I hope you rot.

Yeah well, inthetavern, I suppose you think you're pretty damn smooth for having a name that's spelt backwards. Oh and by the way: at least I don't smell.

Oh God another poem about how the muse struck while sitting one day on the toilet.