poetry

by nrevatehtni

Member since 2001 · Posted 3 Jun 2002 · Edited 20 Dec 2002 · 7 comments

This poem has been flagged as plagiarised.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-02/4:36 PM Reply

This defines "fuck off, you're shit at poetry".

[6] nentwined 4-Jun-02/4:43 PM Reply

nice. :)

[n/a] nrevatehtni 5-Jun-02/8:56 AM Reply

hey, "Daaaaaaark Aaaaaangel", you are such a complete idiot. I love the advice you gave MarkWells - you know, to actually read some poetry before writing some poetry. Well, this poem you've insulted is actually a quite famous poem by Neruda (although, I don't suppose you've ever heard of him). Anyhow, this was once a useful site, Kaolin, but not since it's been populated by people who get off on insulting decent work for kicks. Clearly, industrious people like you, dark angel, should get off your ass and do some work for a living. You must lead a very sad, lonely life. I bet your parents never loved you. Why don't you slit your wrists and get it over with. Your poems and comments are an obvious plea for help. I hope you rot.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › nrevatehtni 20-Dec-02/12:18 PM Reply

PLAGIARISM ALERT Contacting FBI... (100% Complete)

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Jun-02/9:56 AM Reply

Yeah well, inthetavern, I suppose you think you're pretty damn smooth for having a name that's spelt backwards. Oh and by the way: at least I don't smell.

[0] poetandknowit 20-Aug-02/11:49 AM Reply

Oh God another poem about how the muse struck while sitting one day on the toilet.

[n/a] malpaso › poetandknowit 10-Jan-09/8:52 AM Reply

hey, how about a poem about bitching about another poem about how the muse struck while sitting one on the toilet (a plagiarized poem at that!) called 'what if you took a shit and the turd reversed itself in time and jumped back up your ass?'