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Ever With Me (Free verse) by forsaken
They're like vultures in the sky
I swear tonight one of us will die
Picking at flesh with their beaks
Straight off my bones I'm getting weak
I can feel them taring me apart
It's like they ripped out my heart
Their claws left a huge gaping whole
Big enough to let loose my soul
I sense the reaper begin his creeping
His hand reaches out for me my face seeping
Out from my eye sockets the blood pours
He takes my soul leaving my body on the floor
Taking me on a long trip underground
With nothing but lingering souls around
What have I done to be heading to hell
I ask with a grin he says do I really need to tell
You all the terrible things you've done
Says I've committed every sin under the sun
I fall to my knees and beg god for his pity
With a thuderous voice he replys in life were
you ever with me
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.818182
Weighted score: 6.7854795
Overall Rank: 418
Posted: July 4, 2007 10:32 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2007 11:34 AM PDT
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