poemranker ::Waiting for things to Happen by nentwined

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Free verse № 283

Waiting for things to Happen

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 4 comments

I spin my wheels as I tend the pots and note the dates and other whatnots the pots are a'simmerin' soon to be boilin' I'll be 'leased from this toilin' and on to the next other whatnots and in the spare ticks cycles unused I cast my rod out and look for my muse for more stuff to do to fill in the ticks to justify living and other whatnots

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4 comments

[8] lexicon 20-May-02/3:44 PM Reply
I really enjoyed this whimsical poem. thanks for posting it
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Jun-02/5:36 PM Reply
What is this 'toilin' you speak of? Some sort of toilet-linen? Balmilise me with it at once!
[6] forestchild7 19-Jul-02/6:49 PM Reply
interesting...
[n/a] horus8 31-Aug-02/2:55 PM Reply
varium et mutabile semper femina.