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Waiting for things to Happen (Free verse) by nentwined
I spin my wheels as I tend the pots and note the dates and other whatnots the pots are a'simmerin' soon to be boilin' I'll be 'leased from this toilin' and on to the next other whatnots and in the spare ticks cycles unused I cast my rod out and look for my muse for more stuff to do to fill in the ticks to justify living and other whatnots

Up the ladder: you will feel
Down the ladder: Ever With Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.787879
Weighted score: 6.787279
Overall Rank: 417
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST
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Comments:
[8] lexicon @ 207.175.232.211 | 20-May-02/3:44 PM | Reply
I really enjoyed this whimsical poem. thanks for posting it
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 | 16-Jun-02/5:36 PM | Reply
What is this 'toilin' you speak of? Some sort of toilet-linen? Balmilise me with it at once!
[6] forestchild7 @ 216.77.216.8 | 19-Jul-02/6:49 PM | Reply
interesting...
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 31-Aug-02/2:55 PM | Reply
varium et mutabile semper femina.
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