dougsoderstrom
replying on Life On Earth by dougsoderstrom
3 Aug 2004, 8:45 AM
Thanks for the rec.
Life is not funny!
Thanks for the compliment........scumbag!
Hell is no way out.....It is not deliverance!
No.
"A lot" is 2 words, and L3 is 4 sylables.
Boo!
some deleted user
on haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY
3 Aug 2004, 7:52 AM
Funny, jackass. Is that iambic pentameter? 9.
No, you really suck ass. Really.
I totally feel you here, but you know I thought it was about a parent...you are funny. Your poems are very direct.
Since you are 16 I like this, because I appreciate the feelings it give me, I like that you can look at things that happen in life (even the stuff that's bad, but isn't it all about perspective) with a sense of humour...some people are 35 and don't get that.
I hate him already.
It sucks; I hate it. But if it's any consolation, the title was just as shitty as the poem.
Hah hah hah; real fucking funny. Seriously.
*vomit*
you know how to play with your words here...
i thought this was cool, who gave this a one, that's total bs, yeah some people hate rhymes, but this had some substance and connection to the every day person who feels trapped...i hoped i spelled rhyme right.
i liked this, i love the whole dot thing, the "dan" "fan" "plan" thing, the whole trying to describe going beyond self, that's always positive.
but you can kill a dead man, as long as he's talking...yes i have an aversion to the caps button and i'm a uh three dot whore, it's got some kind of name within the whole grammar thing, but its late and stuff so...