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terra incognita (Haiku) by horus8
I dream piss alot. While being carried away by toucan Sam. Urinary fears! Mother hangs my sheets to dry. To heavy to blow. The urge is too much! Like a cat in a sun box. Ruined the car seat. Nentwined wants contrast. Men pay to drink my hot piss. How does that grab you?

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1266
Posted: September 6, 2002 3:43 PM PDT; Last modified: November 20, 2002 11:54 AM PST
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Comments:
[8] god'swife @ 209.179.135.209 | 20-Nov-02/12:21 PM | Reply
Your haikus inspire me.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 20-Nov-02/2:46 PM | Reply
LOL. _____help us all if you ever become unleashed.
[8] Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.114.147 | 15-Feb-03/11:00 PM | Reply
lovely.
[6] deleted user @ 80.205.204.53 | 3-Aug-04/7:55 AM | Reply
"A lot" is 2 words, and L3 is 4 sylables.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 > deleted user | 3-Aug-04/1:56 PM | Reply
Fuck you is two words too, isn't it sunshine?
[8] jesslew @ 65.95.232.161 | 13-Mar-07/7:14 PM | Reply
last line was a surprise..
i like Toucan Sam
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