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terra incognita (Haiku) by horus8

I dream piss alot. While being carried away by toucan Sam. Urinary fears! Mother hangs my sheets to dry. To heavy to blow. The urge is too much! Like a cat in a sun box. Ruined the car seat. Nentwined wants contrast. Men pay to drink my hot piss. How does that grab you?

jesslew 13-Mar-07/7:14 PM
last line was a surprise..
i like Toucan Sam




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