poemranker ::XYZ by crwncka1

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Free verse № 69615

XYZ

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Oct 2003 · 2 comments

here I am again, stuck inside a spinning top, of terrible thoughts, that have once again, taken my head over, just make it all go away, but no use it won't, but I do know, they may control, me no more, wish I were dead, sounds so fucking peaceful, compared to here, where I am forever stuck, just wishing into the wind, tossing fate away, hoping for the moment, that I no longer, feel all alone, with just my stupid thoughts

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[n/a] Shuushin 11-Oct-03/5:47 AM Reply
It has a nice sincere feel to it; works for me.

and "wishing into the wind" is nice - but I'm a sucker for alliteration with W's
[n/a] leonxic 3-Aug-04/6:06 AM Reply
Boo hoo.