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truth (Free verse) by crwncka1
just a small dot,
in a place that never ends,
spinning 'round and 'round,
these things come to me,
as time moves me on,
to where I go,
forever balanced on the land,
that I walk on,
the air I breathe,
being every ones to share,
just like a puppet,
controlled by the strings overhead,
on stage in a theater,
my life goes on and on,
the load always shifting,
from the deep pains to pleasure,
or somewhere in the middle,
the meaning of it being,
only the lessons learned,
but I still wonder why,
my life has not seen,
any love at all,
but still I stand today,
hanging by just a thread,
waiting for my love,
to find its way,
back around to me
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10656
Posted: October 10, 2003 3:50 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2003 3:50 PM PDT
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