Replying to a comment on:

truth (Free verse) by crwncka1

just a small dot, in a place that never ends, spinning 'round and 'round, these things come to me, as time moves me on, to where I go, forever balanced on the land, that I walk on, the air I breathe, being every ones to share, just like a puppet, controlled by the strings overhead, on stage in a theater, my life goes on and on, the load always shifting, from the deep pains to pleasure, or somewhere in the middle, the meaning of it being, only the lessons learned, but I still wonder why, my life has not seen, any love at all, but still I stand today, hanging by just a thread, waiting for my love, to find its way, back around to me

crwncka1 10-Oct-03/4:01 PM
yep 10 on LAME O METER hehe




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001