freelancejoker
replying on Secret Password by freelancejoker
2 Oct 2004, 1:05 AM
Indeed its a christian poem. man always look for god as the last resort... isn't it? blessya
lol
East of Aberdeen,
From oil rigs to pink hued sea
Piper Alpha burns.
It makes sense if you're referring to back then. I thought you were referring to now.
Both shit, the first one less so than the second.
Well it is about getting a part of you out of your body.
Novembers hope. ql
And someone has the gall to slap you with a one? Ha on them.
appeared? Excellent. like I need to tell you that.
I heard he's coming. maybe in 2011.
some people find happiness when they are depressed
Dark Angel is better. He is my hero.
why torture you must endure
lol
Trill, like nuding with lark.
I bet you thought I wasn't going to push flush huh? because of your besplatterment of mine fine scrolls? Think again.
A laquered quail in pose.
Rubbish
Hit 'im again!!
having taken a look at your Åvre, which at the moment consists of two posts, both of which have a rating below 5.0, I can't say the same for you.
They can.
C.F. Shakespeare (sonnet 18, lines 13-14)
"SO long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives grace to thee."
Wilfred Owen, Anthom for Doomed youth (lines 13-14)
"Their flowers the tenderness of patient minds,
and each slow dusk a drawing-down of blinds."
Or the last lines from a sonnet by Ronsard, Les amours de Marie, XIX:
"Ãa! Ãa! que je baise et votre beau tétin
Cent fois pour vois apprendre à vous lever matin."
In short, even though your word is law and god where poetic forms are concerned, and even though you are exceedingly well informed on the topic and I clearly don't know anything at all about it, the last 2 lines can, and frequently do rhyme in a sonnet.