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Put it away! (Limerick) by Special Needs
Babies food, from the breast doth excrete The proccess not only rapid, but neat But you think it's a right. To dispense in my sight. After all you don't see me poo in the street.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5555553
Weighted score: 5.2777777
Overall Rank: 3793
Posted: September 29, 2004 9:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2004 9:37 PM PDT
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[9] That One @ 68.123.215.216 | 29-Sep-04/10:17 PM | Reply
indeed
[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.154.163.133 | 30-Sep-04/4:07 AM | Reply
Lactation is not a form of excretion. You should have written 'secrete' instead. For that, I'm appalled.
[0] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 30-Sep-04/3:42 PM | Reply
Rubbish
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