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Put it away! (Limerick) by Special Needs Babies food, from the breast doth excrete
The proccess not only rapid, but neat
But you think it's a right.
To dispense in my sight.
After all you don't see me poo in the street.
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Posted: September 29, 2004 9:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2004 9:37 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2777777 Overall Rank: 3794 Comments:
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That One @ 68.123.215.216
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29-Sep-04/10:17 PM
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indeed
Lactation is not a form of excretion. You should have written 'secrete' instead. For that, I'm appalled.
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