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Put it away! (Limerick) by Special Needs

Babies food, from the breast doth excrete The proccess not only rapid, but neat But you think it's a right. To dispense in my sight. After all you don't see me poo in the street.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30-Sep-04/4:07 AM
Lactation is not a form of excretion. You should have written 'secrete' instead. For that, I'm appalled.




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