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Secret Password (Free verse) by freelancejoker Deciphering...
Morse code?
Reading...
Beep! Error!
Load again...
Error?
Try once more...
State Filename..
Bad Command or filename?
What?
ACCESS DENIED!
Self destruction activated...10, 9, 8...
Password?
Oh man...
7, 6, 5, 4...
Die...
3, 2...
God...
Accepted! Self destruction halted...
Welcome Son...
Up the ladder:
Shattered
Down the ladder:
alcohol is home.
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Posted: August 10, 2004 8:10 AM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2004 8:10 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2086053 Overall Rank: 4475 Comments:
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Dovina @ 24.52.157.176
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10-Aug-04/11:22 AM
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Sounds Christian, okay if it is. Cryptic, okay too. High on wine, yep, that's me.
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bwickl11 @ 67.119.227.58
> Dovina
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11-Aug-04/5:44 PM
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I would be interested in knowing if this was the intent of the piece... and if it was, are there any allusions I am missing besides the ending?
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freelancejoker @ 202.156.2.115
> bwickl11
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2-Oct-04/1:05 AM
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Indeed its a christian poem. man always look for god as the last resort... isn't it? blessya
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