poemranker ::Secret Password by freelancejoker

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Free verse № 110263

Secret Password

by freelancejoker

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

Deciphering... Morse code? Reading... Beep! Error! Load again... Error? Try once more... State Filename.. Bad Command or filename? What? ACCESS DENIED! Self destruction activated...10, 9, 8... Password? Oh man... 7, 6, 5, 4... Die... 3, 2... God... Accepted! Self destruction halted... Welcome Son...

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3 comments

[7] Dovina 10-Aug-04/11:22 AM Reply
Sounds Christian, okay if it is. Cryptic, okay too. High on wine, yep, that's me.
[n/a] bwickl11 › Dovina 11-Aug-04/5:44 PM Reply
I would be interested in knowing if this was the intent of the piece... and if it was, are there any allusions I am missing besides the ending?
[n/a] freelancejoker › bwickl11 2-Oct-04/1:05 AM Reply
Indeed its a christian poem. man always look for god as the last resort... isn't it? blessya