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Secret Password (Free verse) by freelancejoker

Deciphering... Morse code? Reading... Beep! Error! Load again... Error? Try once more... State Filename.. Bad Command or filename? What? ACCESS DENIED! Self destruction activated...10, 9, 8... Password? Oh man... 7, 6, 5, 4... Die... 3, 2... God... Accepted! Self destruction halted... Welcome Son...

bwickl11 11-Aug-04/5:44 PM
I would be interested in knowing if this was the intent of the piece... and if it was, are there any allusions I am missing besides the ending?




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