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Insolence (Lyric) by alverland theme park
Always see you with that sad face Makes me wonder if you ever smile When you were young, Who beat the fun outta you? Dark clouds surround you all the time It makes me wonder if you bring rain When you were young, Who took the sun away from you? …chorus… You used to be so innocent When did you become so insolent? You were at the top of the world But now you’ve come tumbling down Turning that smile into a frown Never have I known such a sad girl What will drive your demons away? I’m afraid I’m not strong enough You used to be doing so well But who the hell put that spell on you? You’re lonely and your heart is crushed I wish I could fix those broken pieces You used to be doing so well But tell me, whose anvil fell on you? …repeat chorus… Hope that in your next life, you’ll escape From all of your pain and your self-hate When you were young, Did you know I’d be the one, To dust you off when you needed help? …repeat chorus…

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2619
Posted: September 30, 2004 3:23 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2004 3:23 PM PDT
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[8] nocturnalism @ 129.8.190.173 | 30-Sep-04/10:19 PM | Reply
some people find happiness when they are depressed
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