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Northern lights (Haiku) by Mr Pig East of Aberdeen,
from grey orb to pink hued sea
man and God aghast.
Up the ladder:
clay or mud (hertz donut version)
Down the ladder:
The Struggling Poet's Lament
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Posted: September 30, 2004 3:35 AM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2004 3:35 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.388889 Overall Rank: 799 Comments:
kids with watercolors paint the smog.
East of Aberdeen,
From oil rigs to pink hued sea Piper Alpha burns.
lol
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from grey orb to pink hued sea
man and God yogurt.