Re: a comment on The Dark Poet by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.42.250	28-Aug-07/1:25 PM
Sit right down, Love. I'll put on a kettle of tea and bring out some biscuits. Now how true is it you're in the dark as Ranger notes? And how is the light brighter for you and this poet of whom I was speaking. I'd love to hear your thoughts, but you and Ranger just sit here and chat awhile; I'll be right back.
Re: a comment on The Dark Poet by Dovina	drnick 24.247.158.152	27-Aug-07/4:39 PM
Well I've never had a dish of radiation I didn't like, so I'm not quite worried about that (vanilla uranium yellow cake is the BEST). Going down undah', eh? I'm sure that will be fun! I can't say I've attempted to watch cricket in a very long time and I've forgotten all the rules so I might not find it interesting if I did. I do have a facebook account, I tried to search for you but...I don't know your name, so that posed a minor problem. I did just friend request you on myspace, though I don't really use that very often. Try to find me on facebook, my name is my email address on my profile here.
Re: a comment on The Dark Poet by Dovina	Dovina 70.133.45.227	27-Aug-07/4:32 PM
Step right in; let your hair down. You know my parlor is always open.
Re: a comment on The Dark Poet by Dovina	Ranger 86.131.50.216	27-Aug-07/2:29 PM
You've sold out to capitalism too? Welcome to the club, just don't get mistaken for a rogue FBI agent when you're in Russia. They'll take you to a London restaurant and serve you an appalling dish of radiation. I'm good, got the degree I was after and am now just saving a few pounds to catapult me to Australia next year. In the meantime there are the one day internationals between England and India to enjoy (you have to be severely English to watch cricket, it seems...). You know you sent me an email a while ago (refer to a previous conversation for evidence...)? It never arrived. I'd like to tell you what this says about Microsoft, but the words just won't appear. Have you considered Facebook?
Re: a comment on The Dark Poet by Dovina	drnick 24.247.158.152	27-Aug-07/2:18 PM
Hello there old chum, how are you these days? I finally got a job, however its with the oil industry... which isnt necessarily a bad thing if you don't mind being pure evil, so it works! I might actually have to go to the motherland for training, which is exciting. Anywho, good to see you're still alive along with my reputation.
Re: You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet	Ranger 86.152.54.236	27-Aug-07/2:14 PM
Why have you removed all your poemes?
Re: The Dark Poet by Dovina	Ranger 86.131.46.83	27-Aug-07/1:56 PM
To make it topical, I suggest the following alternative finale: "for gifts like these they call him drnick".
Re: a comment on Then what is the sleeve? by T. Jonathron Remp	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.77	27-Aug-07/10:46 AM
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Re: The Dark Poet by Dovina	INTRANSIT 65.29.52.204	27-Aug-07/6:50 AM
More about the "happy peril in a runaway colt"- please. I also think it's too straight/technical/cold.
Re: Scurvey by horus8	Joi 207.119.185.153	27-Aug-07/12:00 AM
Not good in my opinion.
Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:59 PM
very crisp. I liked it.
Re: The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:59 PM
ok?
Re: Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:58 PM
Nice feel to this Haiku. Beatiful thought it brings to me. Thanks.
Re: Scurvey by horus8	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:58 PM
I didn't care for your wording in this one. Keep trying different styles.
Re: A Friend in the Night by Joi	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:54 PM
I love this one! It says so much.
Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:37 PM
Interesting. Waves of time is cool.
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:37 PM
Very insightful words. My oldest son that is 25 now has been to Iraq twice now. God Bless him. I like this poem very much. Good description.
Re: Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:13 PM
Short and to the point. Not suttle enough. Tone it down and add to it.
Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:12 PM
Not bad, needs a message? Ya think?
Re: The Critical and His Horse by MacFrantic	Joi 207.119.185.153	26-Aug-07/11:11 PM
I liked the third line. Need an ending.