A cliche homerun of shit. Talk about forced rhyme? What about forced plain old Bad droll writing? This Is a plate full of nut sack.

that makes you go insain... It's spelled INSANE. either way im bringin you pain...Spelled BRINGING and its all for my ...Spelled IT'S or IT IS. Below average...a 3!!

Absolute chestnut!!

Nice work. Above the "Average".

This is ot a limerick. A limerick consists of 5 lines and has the rhyme scheme of aabba. Joanna and Spanners don't rhyme and this has only 3 lines. Not funny either. A 1.

I feel nostalgic too in a queer way!!! Nice work

The first 2 lines rhyme while the later 3 donot. Don't you think the initial rhyme was unnecessary??

A very immatured piece and nothing poetic whatsoever.

The rhyme seems forced. You could have just written that in a free verse and expressed yourself better. Good effort since it's a Villanelle (They are hard, I admit) but not exactly classy!!

I found the "THOU" thing pretty unnecessary as you really don't follow it up in the other cases. I won't say I hate but don't love it either. A 5!!

Nah, I don't really like it. Doesn't flow too well and not too poetic either. A 4 for your efforts though.

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What more do you need than commendation?? Not very hilarious bu a decent read.

I can't get you. Either I am intellectually challenged or this is crap. I rust your abilities, so I settle for the former conclusion. Do check me out. A 5 as a benefit of doubt!!

Okay, a bit cheesy but nice work!! Just the rhyme needs a little more work. You start with abcb and end up with aaaa. Anyways, hanks for reading mine. I've posted a new one too. Look at it if you have the chance.

Hah, I've never been one to pen a good limerick. Very well done. The meter was a tad off in a couple lines but not enough to render distaste. Bravo! An 8.

mmm, I enjoyed this! A literary masterpiece; 10, without hesitation.

Any fuck that cries on a rose, and then tries to turn it into shit poetry should be SHOT.