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the thrill to kill (Free verse) by AM I EVIL? i got the look of kill in my eyes
and its no suprise
i can hypnotize to get
what i need in your mind
and what i need
is when cannibals feed
the thought in their brain
that makes you go insain
and if you try to get ahead
youll leave in a box
with a bullet in your head
but either way im bringin you pain
and its all for my gain
the thought to kill
gives me thrill
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: September 17, 2004 5:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2004 5:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5598 Comments:
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AM I EVIL? @ 24.71.61.94
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17-Sep-04/5:45 PM
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ya its kinda violent but.........i was real pissed off when i wrote it so what can i say?
Actually, it is really good..this sounds like it could actually become a song....very powerful this poem is....
Try one more.
that makes you go insain... It's spelled INSANE.
either way im bringin you pain...Spelled BRINGING and its all for my ...Spelled IT'S or IT IS. Below average...a 3!!
hahahaha i hope u werent tryin to hurt sum1 miss dictionary
and below average....a 3 u act like i give a fuk what u give me but w/e ill try harder to speel bater ho 191 view(s)
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