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the thrill to kill (Free verse) by AM I EVIL?

i got the look of kill in my eyes and its no suprise i can hypnotize to get what i need in your mind and what i need is when cannibals feed the thought in their brain that makes you go insain and if you try to get ahead youll leave in a box with a bullet in your head but either way im bringin you pain and its all for my gain the thought to kill gives me thrill

redneck_woman3322 18-Sep-04/7:48 PM
Actually, it is really good..this sounds like it could actually become a song....very powerful this poem is....




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