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the thrill to kill (Free verse) by AM I EVIL?

i got the look of kill in my eyes and its no suprise i can hypnotize to get what i need in your mind and what i need is when cannibals feed the thought in their brain that makes you go insain and if you try to get ahead youll leave in a box with a bullet in your head but either way im bringin you pain and its all for my gain the thought to kill gives me thrill

Bhaskaryya 21-Dec-04/11:43 PM
that makes you go insain... It's spelled INSANE.

either way im bringin you pain...Spelled BRINGING


and its all for my ...Spelled IT'S or IT IS.

Below average...a 3!!





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