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The Drop (Limerick) by auscot The drop fell free from my nose,
trouble is, it fell down on my prose.
Now my story is wet,
unlikely to get,
much more than commended, I suppose.
Up the ladder:
blobby sums +-*/
Down the ladder:
Al-Qaida Blues
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Posted: December 20, 2004 5:58 PM PST; Last modified: December 20, 2004 5:58 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.820706 Overall Rank: 10923 Comments:
Hah, I've never been one to pen a good limerick. Very well done. The meter was a tad off in a couple lines but not enough to render distaste. Bravo! An 8.
What more do you need than commendation?? Not very hilarious bu a decent read.
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drips fall from a runny nose
though the form is good
I think you should
make that last line a thing to expose