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Limerick № 116930

The Drop

by auscot

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Dec 2004 · 3 comments

The drop fell free from my nose, trouble is, it fell down on my prose. Now my story is wet, unlikely to get, much more than commended, I suppose.

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[6] Dovina 20-Dec-04/6:16 PM Reply
Colds are bad for prose
drips fall from a runny nose
though the form is good
I think you should
make that last line a thing to expose
[8] Yikes 21-Dec-04/6:22 PM Reply
Hah, I've never been one to pen a good limerick. Very well done. The meter was a tad off in a couple lines but not enough to render distaste. Bravo! An 8.
[5] Bhaskaryya 21-Dec-04/10:45 PM Reply
What more do you need than commendation?? Not very hilarious bu a decent read.