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The Drop (Limerick) by auscot

The drop fell free from my nose, trouble is, it fell down on my prose. Now my story is wet, unlikely to get, much more than commended, I suppose.

Yikes 21-Dec-04/6:22 PM
Hah, I've never been one to pen a good limerick. Very well done. The meter was a tad off in a couple lines but not enough to render distaste. Bravo! An 8.




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