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The Drop (Limerick) by auscot

The drop fell free from my nose, trouble is, it fell down on my prose. Now my story is wet, unlikely to get, much more than commended, I suppose.

Dovina 20-Dec-04/6:16 PM
Colds are bad for prose
drips fall from a runny nose
though the form is good
I think you should
make that last line a thing to expose




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