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Remembrance (Free verse) by dragonfly
I hear your voice Singing inside Humming inside Echoing through me like a recurring dream I feel you near Softly beside me Handing me Reaching out for me like a child in need I see it all so clearly Like if it were yesterday You and I laughing I miss those days... I miss you.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9259257
Weighted score: 6.921164
Overall Rank: 197
Posted: September 5, 2002 2:35 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 2:35 PM PDT
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[7] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 6-Sep-02/3:25 AM | Reply
I like the regretful tone of this, but 'Like if it were yesterday' is ungrammatical - 'As if it were yesterday' would be right. 'Handing me' is curious as well - handing you something? Touching you? It's quite a nice phrase.
[9] poetryman @ 66.173.175.21 | 8-Nov-04/4:40 PM | Reply
very nice, a loved one never really leaves us for they remain close to our hearts and memories....Bob:)
[7] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 12-Nov-04/11:48 PM | Reply
Like it was yesterday.
[9] Bhaskaryya @ 212.162.192.165 | 21-Dec-04/11:18 PM | Reply
I feel nostalgic too in a queer way!!! Nice work
[3] Edna Sweetlove @ 127.0.0.1 | 15-Feb-21/9:51 AM | Reply
sad but bad
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