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Remembrance

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Sep 2002 · 5 comments

I hear your voice Singing inside Humming inside Echoing through me like a recurring dream I feel you near Softly beside me Handing me Reaching out for me like a child in need I see it all so clearly Like if it were yesterday You and I laughing I miss those days... I miss you.

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[7] Christof 6-Sep-02/3:25 AM Reply

I like the regretful tone of this, but 'Like if it were yesterday' is ungrammatical - 'As if it were yesterday' would be right. 'Handing me' is curious as well - handing you something? Touching you? It's quite a nice phrase.

[9] poetryman 8-Nov-04/4:40 PM Reply

very nice, a loved one never really leaves us for they remain close to our hearts and memories....Bob:)

[7] horus8 12-Nov-04/11:48 PM Reply

Like it was yesterday.

[9] Bhaskaryya 21-Dec-04/11:18 PM Reply

I feel nostalgic too in a queer way!!! Nice work

[3] Edna Sweetlove 15-Feb-21/9:51 AM Reply

sad but bad