poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Remembrance by dragonfly.

Christof6 Sep 2002

I like the regretful tone of this, but 'Like if it were yesterday' is ungrammatical - 'As if it were yesterday' would be right. 'Handing me' is curious as well - handing you something? Touching you? It's quite a nice phrase.