jroday
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
19 Feb 2005, 10:20 AM
Yes I do!
The first verse is great, but what happens next? Misspelling and misgrammar to be sure, but what are you saying?
Don't know about Ezra, but the guy with a rustily severed kidney isn't laughing. To me it's poetry. Can't say why, just is.
Hey! That name is my own, without the whole (incomplete) deal.
I AM NOT CONTAINED BY THIS UNIVERSE
When I thought of it, I laughed too. Then a Grinch like grin came over me. But is it poetry? Would Ezra Pound laugh at it?
Or would he laugh at it.
Only if he or she is a sexist.
Wow, bet he never fixates again. Comes from the Bible story about woman made from the rib of man. Had to laugh, hope you meant it funny.
No, I couldn't stay mad. It's a pretty good poem no matter how old you are. It had more to do with some unrelated baloney. I hope youâve got sunny days wherever you are.
He'll be so impressed with your progress. Good work.
Seems to get rolling, then stalls. Encore? Maybe check the definition of nihilist. I'm not sure.
Or just alter it a little. The major part suggests he's dead. The minor suggests he went to another woman. Wha'd you get?
Something tells me this is a one-timer, pure. I'd leave it if it is.
So do you agree with me that praying during an examination should be forbidden?
Love the poem, keep'em coming.
" He that worketh deceit shall not dwell within my house: he that telleth lies shall not tarry in my sight... He also says you reap what you sow, obviously they are praying to a false god, and the only other person I know would put a thought like that in someones head is the devil.
Special, yeah.
That what my mommy says any way yepper roni
I'm mommy's special boy uh huh I am.
thanks for the comments...probably silly because I wrote it on my birthday after I sprained my ankle, which I don't really remember..I need to edit...
I thank you to no limit.
Congratulations on inventing the Christian yogurt enema.