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Dustin(Incomplete) (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Why is it hard to write about you? Because there is so much to write about you You know me at times better than I know myself Yet somehow, I can always teach you something new Then you will surpass me, as is your destiny It doesn't matter what it is, I often find myself Left in your shadow, and yet I suprise you none the less Never by much, but enough to push you further Yet lately I feel like your a little too far past me

Up the ladder: Blur
Down the ladder: The Anthem of Drunk Man

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.333333
Weighted score: 5.8964715
Overall Rank: 1453
Posted: February 19, 2005 1:51 AM PST; Last modified: February 19, 2005 1:51 AM PST
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[n/a] MacFrantic @ 64.12.116.67 | 19-Feb-05/9:41 AM | Reply
Hey! That name is my own, without the whole (incomplete) deal.
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