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The Frontman of a Band Called Joe (Free verse) by MacFrantic
... and the feedback from the microphone was unbearable.
I asked it how I looked but it could only offer critcisms.
We walked into a mirror on the ceiling and our reflections
did the same, but the ceiling was a party, and the mirror was a street.
An easy bake oven fed the guests and the host
left her lipstick on the mouth of the gun
barrel of monkeys with dyslexia are hanging from
my every word.
Oh, and how they sang.
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Weighted score: 5.8964715
Overall Rank: 1474
Posted: September 7, 2004 12:03 PM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2004 12:03 PM PDT
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