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Blur (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
I didn't ask for this life style But since for now, it is what its I'll be spinning dizzy Just to get things done I'm not saying I didn't see this coming Because if you look, you know I did You did it to yourself, you fell in love with me And I knew it was only going to end badly I'm sorry, if I'm busy Trying to rebuild my life So that I can be worth someones time But your right, I never let myself be fully captured I loved what you saw in me And I knew that under the banner of a different day When we had both stopped spinning dizzy Things would have gone better


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Arithmetic Mean: 8.333333
Weighted score: 5.8964715
Overall Rank: 1473
Posted: March 22, 2005 1:55 AM PST; Last modified: March 22, 2005 1:55 AM PST
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