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The Frontman of a Band Called Joe (Free verse) by MacFrantic

... and the feedback from the microphone was unbearable. I asked it how I looked but it could only offer critcisms. We walked into a mirror on the ceiling and our reflections did the same, but the ceiling was a party, and the mirror was a street. An easy bake oven fed the guests and the host left her lipstick on the mouth of the gun barrel of monkeys with dyslexia are hanging from my every word. Oh, and how they sang.

LintyWeenis 8-Sep-04/2:19 PM
I won't vote on this because poems that I like I tend to hand out 8's to. But whether or not the world's 8 is the same is mine, well I don't know. But I will say that I like this. Reminds me of the stuff you'd find in Cobain's journal.




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