aww poor you being stuck on "THE LIST" seems terrible it must have affected you emotionally for you to have written a poem about it, not a terribly genius poem but still a poem none the less, maybe you should get help.

wow bad

wow man you need to stop writing poetry and go speak to someone

damn that sounds annoying

wash

good poem wilco

you seem infatuated with all things "gay" You could use a new vocabulary, and seemingly, a new personality as well.

Do they have schools in your country?

yeah

i agree with the points you laid out but maybe you can improve on your spelling? the structure wasn't there as well... so...

honestly now, have some self-respect

amusing, certainly. there's no need to take yourself seriously all the time. it made me smile, and isn't that enough? poetry is whatever we want it to be now, isn't it

You have no choice. Go for it. Just be careful.

Dump the bum!!!!

Destiny and fate change nothing! Get real. Look at life squarely and stop making excuses. Don't stop writing poetry though.

That's "nentwined" or kaolin. And I'd be on lesser sites where people are less honest.

confusing

whats the point

this piece seemed to me that all the bitterness has escaped you, my friend. be grateful for a love that has blossomed. i'm happy for you..

Well, I've taken into consideration the only two suggestions for a title, and have decided to use a hybrid of both.. sort of. Behold its new title: Skuld Resurrected. (Skuld is the Norse goddess of fate, future.. seems that I'm having a sudden flare for mythology these days.) Any objections or other reactions are welcomed.