poemranker ::TEENAGERS LIFE by jessicasgurl

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Free verse № 106287

TEENAGERS LIFE

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Jun 2004 · 4 comments

a teenagers life consists of alot of things namein sum of them is like readin a book so i hope u like books cause a teens life is worth the writein now you will or have had fights wit parent, have to make sure your hair and make up are perfect you also have to have the perfect men in your life to get though it all like fights wit friends fights wit ppl you dont even know sum of you may have already lived a teen life and sum of you havent to warn you know the years are comein and will interupe your life im livein that feelin now it sux belive meeh yall hope you dont have it as bad as sum kids but teens are teens hope you get though it okay this poem was just sumthin i had to get out its jummble and i know i did bad on it but the words need to come out so they did. rate this one plz its jumble but is okay i guess thanx holla

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[n/a] jessicasgurl 22-Jun-04/6:55 PM Reply
rate meeh
[0] Blindpoetry › jessicasgurl 22-Jun-04/8:47 PM Reply
Being a 14 yr. old teen and reading this... I say: WOW!
You really touched me with your grammar... and your 'jumble' ... and your spell checking... It is unbelievably astonishing to see such words express so deep so pure so... TEEN like...

..And thus, I give it a Zer0... As a token of my gratitude.
[4] arduinn 24-Jun-04/6:53 AM Reply
i agree with the points you laid out but maybe you can improve on your spelling? the structure wasn't there as well... so...
[n/a] pain killer › arduinn 26-Jun-04/2:47 PM Reply
well i like this poem a lot so ho hum