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A Surrender of the Heart (Free verse) by Torok She dwells in solitude, content in her own company.
He dwells in solitude, miserable alone,
It seems that she's satisfied, that life's enough
Mascuerading as the girl at ease on her own.
He shows his anger, his envy, his suffering
Knowing that he needs someone to love him.
But they both give up, accepting thier fate
Never knowing love, feeling only hate.
Up the ladder:
Give it up Max
Down the ladder:
Ghost
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Posted: June 22, 2004 11:44 AM PDT; Last modified: June 23, 2004 10:49 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7145 Comments:
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Dovina @ 24.52.157.176
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23-Jun-04/10:45 PM
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Why would she feel hate? She is content alone. He has problems, but the last line doesn't seem to work for her.
yeah
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