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Breakfast (Free verse) by flouredweevle Stood in line
In the rain
Got very wet
My turn came
No food left
Up the ladder:
Black Buns
Down the ladder:
Parallel
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.0625
Posted: November 15, 2003 1:06 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2003 1:06 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.063354 Overall Rank: 13332 Comments:
I'm sorry
damn that sounds annoying
maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...
but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol 347 view(s)
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This would make a good Senryu.
-7- for what could have been.