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Free verse № 75465

Breakfast

by flouredweevle

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

Stood in line In the rain Got very wet My turn came No food left

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4 comments

[7] Shuushin 15-Nov-03/1:16 PM Reply
welcome to the USSR, comrade.

This would make a good Senryu.

-7- for what could have been.
[0] LuV_jOhNnY 9-Jan-04/9:14 PM Reply
I'm sorry
[n/a] Torok 24-Jun-04/4:50 AM Reply
damn that sounds annoying
[10] 7!3 19-Nov-04/7:46 PM Reply
maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...

but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol