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Breakfast (Free verse) by flouredweevle
Stood in line In the rain Got very wet My turn came No food left
Up the ladder: Black Buns
Down the ladder: Parallel
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0625
Weighted score: 4.063354
Overall Rank: 13327
Posted: November 15, 2003 1:06 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2003 1:06 PM PST
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[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 15-Nov-03/1:16 PM | Reply
welcome to the USSR, comrade.

This would make a good Senryu.

-7- for what could have been.
[0] LuV_jOhNnY @ 198.108.232.52 | 9-Jan-04/9:14 PM | Reply
I'm sorry
[n/a] Torok @ 212.219.142.161 | 24-Jun-04/4:50 AM | Reply
damn that sounds annoying
[10] 7!3 @ 219.93.174.101 | 19-Nov-04/7:46 PM | Reply
maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...

but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol
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