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Breakfast (Free verse) by flouredweevle

Stood in line In the rain Got very wet My turn came No food left

7!3 19-Nov-04/7:46 PM
maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...

but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol




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