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Breakfast (Free verse) by flouredweevle

Stood in line In the rain Got very wet My turn came No food left

Shuushin 15-Nov-03/1:16 PM
welcome to the USSR, comrade.

This would make a good Senryu.

-7- for what could have been.




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