Lyric № 106469

Someday

Member since 2004 · Posted 24 Jun 2004 · Edited 14 Jul 2004 · 4 comments

Someday The river of tears will run dry I will mourn but I will not cry Tears won't fog my eyes And I'll see the truth Someday There'll be nothing left to feel Maybe then I will know what is real I'll have lived and grown old And my heart will be cold Numbed by pain Nothing will hurt me My heart will be strong But I'll not be happy At least not for long I don't want to change But they're no way around Athough my hearts been smashed And been thrown to the ground I want to be in love Forever

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4 comments

[6] Dovina 24-Jun-04/9:04 AM Reply

You have no choice. Go for it. Just be careful.

[8] Drunk Russian Poet 24-Jun-04/7:53 PM Reply

This isn't that great as a poem, but for some reason I like it. Would be better, methinks, as a lyric.

[n/a] moonlightdance › Drunk Russian Poet 6-Jul-04/7:26 AM Reply

yeah i meant to put it as a lyric, it was just a careless mistake.

[6] Dovina 14-Jul-04/10:29 AM Reply

Verses 1 and 2 good. Verse 3 weak. Verse 4 doesn't make sense.