I remember when you started out with this. I hope this does'nt take your life.

am i reading this right? you're stating God evolved?

Congrats. Previously it was only the poem that was stupid. Following your defense of, it is now clear you are stupid.

That is a really great poem! I give you a 10

Your from England. How dare you judge our president. President Bush is way better than John Kerry. John Kerry had Botox injections. To me that sounds a little dumb because he doesn't look any better.

lol nice... intriguing!

i read the editors note and after that skipped. good intro, tho lol

lol i think i like the comments more than the poem

nice poem! people should write, in my opinion, more simpler poems like this once in a while. simple and tasty! :)

lol i enjoyed this. nice one!

it was... O.K.. i like your other poem, "sunshine" better..

liked it

lol...

best among the worst?

YIKES. what happened?

lol yea, it's bad.. but it made me laugh!

maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished... but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol

pretty good------chelsea

that, my friend, is a fat man singing

not bad... but i think (just a guess) you'll do better without rhyming.