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Murder Poem 1 (Free verse) by [mojo]
I'll meet you at five, You bring the sandwiches I'll bring the gun, You speak the language Of love, And I speak that of fun. Let's go for a ride, You just bring yourself and a smile, I'll provide an adequate car, We'll spin it round the sticks a while, We'll push things a little too far. 'Cos Summertime's arrived, So bring some shorts and maybe We'll dip our feet in the river, We're stone cold murderers baby, Winter's a long forgotten shiver. So put on your sunglasses, I'll pump up the sounds, We'll find a likely target, And wind the window down.

Up the ladder: the queen of carts
Down the ladder: missing you

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4806
Posted: November 16, 2002 1:32 AM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2002 1:32 AM PST
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[10] 7!3 @ 219.93.174.101 | 19-Nov-04/7:30 PM | Reply
lol i enjoyed this. nice one!
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