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Bhaskaryya on Recognition by nentwined 21 Dec 2004, 10:46 PM

trust**

Bhaskaryya on One-Man Act by Blindpoetry 21 Dec 2004, 10:53 PM

Nah, I don't really like it. Doesn't flow too well and not too poetic either. A 4 for your efforts though.

Bhaskaryya on A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere 21 Dec 2004, 10:31 PM

Okay, a bit cheesy but nice work!! Just the rhyme needs a little more work. You start with abcb and end up with aaaa. Anyways, hanks for reading mine. I've posted a new one too. Look at it if you have the chance.

Bhaskaryya on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 21 Dec 2004, 10:57 PM

I found the "THOU" thing pretty unnecessary as you really don't follow it up in the other cases. I won't say I hate but don't love it either. A 5!!

Bhaskaryya on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2004, 10:39 PM

A very heart-felt dedication but a chest-nut nevertheless. You could have done better to avoid cliches. Anyways, a 6 from me and I hope you'd check me out too.

Bhaskaryya on Recognition by nentwined 21 Dec 2004, 10:44 PM

I can't get you. Either I am intellectually challenged or this is crap. I rust your abilities, so I settle for the former conclusion. Do check me out. A 5 as a benefit of doubt!!

Bhaskaryya on The Drop by auscot 21 Dec 2004, 10:45 PM

What more do you need than commendation?? Not very hilarious bu a decent read.

Bhaskaryya on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8 21 Dec 2004, 11:03 PM

The rhyme seems forced. You could have just written that in a free verse and expressed yourself better. Good effort since it's a Villanelle (They are hard, I admit) but not exactly classy!!

Bhaskaryya on 9/11 by TheDevil 21 Dec 2004, 11:06 PM

A very immatured piece and nothing poetic whatsoever.

Bhaskaryya on keep on digging by nentwined 21 Dec 2004, 11:11 PM

The first 2 lines rhyme while the later 3 donot. Don't you think the initial rhyme was unnecessary??

Bhaskaryya on Remembrance by dragonfly 21 Dec 2004, 11:18 PM

I feel nostalgic too in a queer way!!! Nice work

Bhaskaryya on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2004, 11:23 PM

Powerfully expressed but the flow breaks here and there. Breaks out of the "Mediocre" tag but not all that classy either.

Bhaskaryya on Joanna by DR Limerick 21 Dec 2004, 11:26 PM

This is ot a limerick. A limerick consists of 5 lines and has the rhyme scheme of aabba. Joanna and Spanners don't rhyme and this has only 3 lines. Not funny either. A 1.

Bhaskaryya on Interstellar Hell by PsydewaysTears 21 Dec 2004, 11:29 PM

Nice work. Above the "Average".

some deleted user on Andrew part II by Spindle 21 Dec 2004, 11:31 PM

Absolute chestnut!!

Bhaskaryya on the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL? 21 Dec 2004, 11:43 PM

that makes you go insain... It's spelled INSANE. either way im bringin you pain...Spelled BRINGING and its all for my ...Spelled IT'S or IT IS. Below average...a 3!!

horus8 on What is that I seek again? by Bhaskaryya 22 Dec 2004, 1:16 AM

A cliche homerun of shit. Talk about forced rhyme? What about forced plain old Bad droll writing? This Is a plate full of nut sack.

horus8 on Sidestepping Stupor by PsydewaysTears 22 Dec 2004, 1:19 AM

Nicely done.

horus8 on The Wandering Jew by Lifeboatman 22 Dec 2004, 1:27 AM

lol, yep

horus8 on Impatience always backfires 913 by notule 22 Dec 2004, 1:31 AM

Flucked