poemranker ::Sidestepping Stupor by PsydewaysTears

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Free verse № 117100

Sidestepping Stupor

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Dec 2004 · 3 comments

Perhaps to exist is to wonder, and to wonder— exist. I stretched my brain and snapped it in two... A prominent emptiness lingered underneath. Perhaps to exist is to feel, and to feel— exist. I grasped my heart and wrung it through my fingers... Its slimy residue evaporated in the wind. I stepped nakedly out from the shower of distilled thought and graciously handed myself a towel. I wrote my wonderings onto murdered flesh, read them aloud, and swallowed them whole. Satisfaction gurgled in my gut as I digested salty moments of unbearability. And an ogre named Reason sank into the depths of my closet to remain locked away until further notice— or until the end of time.

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[10] horus8 22-Dec-04/1:19 AM Reply
Nicely done.
[n/a] PsydewaysTears › horus8 22-Dec-04/1:33 AM Reply
Heh! :D Thanks again, ;)
[9] Dovina 22-Dec-04/10:51 AM Reply
At least you're not assuming we know the setting this time. This is good. Verses 5,6 and 7 need some opening transition, I think.