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Come Home Soon (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey
I hugged him as a boy. And through the years he has become My greatest pride and joy. I love him more than I can say, His life more precious than my own. But gone are the whims and notions Of the little boy that I have known. For the years have passed so quickly Since the time it all began, And now he stands before me With the convictions of a man. He wants to serve his country He states aloud with pride, As I try to sort out the emotions That I'm feeling deep inside. A union of the uncertain fear, Which I cannot control, And the allegiance that lies deep within My patriotic soul. I trust that my years of guidance Will serve as a strong foundation As he perfoms the duties requested From his beloved nation. God, please guide him as he travels To the places our Military have bled, And walk with him through pathways where those heroes' feet have tread. Oh, Sweet Land of Liberty, Humbly I give you my son, Praying you'll return him safely home When his work for you is done.

Down the ladder: FALLING ASLEEP

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Weighted score: 5.2622466
Overall Rank: 3988
Posted: August 24, 2005 6:12 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2005 6:12 PM PDT
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[10] Bethy @ 24.222.32.243 | 26-Aug-05/7:02 PM | Reply
Goose bumps...*10* the last two verse are my favs...:) Bethy
[n/a] Sunshine Conkey @ 205.188.116.69 | 26-Aug-05/7:59 PM | Reply
Thanx: my 21 year old son is in Iraq
[10] Bethy @ 24.222.32.150 > Sunshine Conkey | 29-Aug-05/4:32 PM | Reply
When I read your reply...i hugged my son(12yrs) for me and for you...I will light a candle for you in hopes of his safe return...:) Bethy
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