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Impatience always backfires 913 (Other) by notule Impatience always backfires.
Never say never
Never say forever
Never
say nothing
Never say all.
Lies are funny but the truth is funnier and
the funniest things are usually the truest.
Like Spirograph tattoos
and
the hem of his garment,
like Cake and Tool.
advice:
Don?t time out
and make a click
Stay Awake
don?t nod and dream
Up the ladder:
If I Could
Down the ladder:
Cover song
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PSTWeighted score: 3.6608903 Overall Rank: 13563 Comments:
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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are these really tonkas? the rhythms seem off. On a modem temporarily which is making me reluctant to look things up. :) I like more flow in the stuff I read, don't really understand what you're doing. Agree with hat you're saying here, at least.
bunch of empty phrases sounding like wisdom; except of course
Like Spirograph tattoos and the hem of his garment, like Cake and Tool that is COOL! what window is it?? where were you all the time?
Flucked
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