poemranker ::Impatience always backfires 913 by notule

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Impatience always backfires 913

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 4 comments

Impatience always backfires. Never say never Never say forever Never say nothing Never say all. Lies are funny but the truth is funnier and the funniest things are usually the truest. Like Spirograph tattoos and the hem of his garment, like Cake and Tool. advice: Don?t time out and make a click Stay Awake don?t nod and dream

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[5] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
are these really tonkas? the rhythms seem off. On a modem temporarily which is making me reluctant to look things up. :) I like more flow in the stuff I read, don't really understand what you're doing. Agree with hat you're saying here, at least.
[5] nentwined 5-Apr-02/11:15 PM Reply
I liked some of the individual bits but not the sum of the pieces.
[3] hoopoe 19-May-02/3:14 AM Reply
bunch of empty phrases sounding like wisdom; except of course
Like Spirograph tattoos
and the hem of his garment,
like Cake and Tool

that is COOL! what window is it?? where were you all the time?
[7] horus8 22-Dec-04/1:31 AM Reply
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